Great poem salsabil just remember not to put a comma after every line Also it would of been better if you would of spoke in 2nd person
Salsabil great work but poems don’t have a full stop
Great work Salsabil, but when it says your ugly go die add commas and you cant stay go die but other than that your piece of work is good
Great work but the title doesn’t have capital letters in the title
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Great poem salsabil just remember not to put a comma after every line
Also it would of been better if you would of spoke in 2nd person
Salsabil great work but poems don’t have a full stop
Great work Salsabil, but when it says your ugly go die add commas and you cant stay go die but other than that your piece of work is good
Great work but the title doesn’t have capital letters in the title