Amazing! I loved all the description in Granddad’s diary I can’t think of a bad thing to say but you put an ‘a’ in the middle of a sentence for no reason.
That was SPECTACULAR! all of your paragraphs were really powerful and exiting! all though you made a mistake on Leonards diary paragraph two where it say’s adopt a one of them your supposed to write adopt one of them.
so could you do that for me please?
Nice variation of similes and sentence starters. I like how you really became Leonard when writing his diary.
Amazing! I loved all the description in Granddad’s diary I can’t think of a bad thing to say but you put an ‘a’ in the middle of a sentence for no reason.
That was SPECTACULAR! all of your paragraphs were really powerful and exiting! all though you made a mistake on Leonards diary paragraph two where it say’s adopt a one of them your supposed to write adopt one of them.
so could you do that for me please?
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