LOVE IT ,BUT THE ONLY THING I WOULD SAY IS SLOW DOWN AND USE YOUR CAPITAL AND FULL STOPS BUT THE STORY IS REALLY GREAT
It was really great but you missed out a few capital letters, apart from that it was really good.
LOvely work your grandparents seem kind!! Love it
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LOVE IT ,BUT THE ONLY THING I WOULD SAY IS SLOW DOWN AND USE YOUR CAPITAL AND FULL STOPS BUT THE STORY IS REALLY GREAT
It was really great but you missed out a few capital letters, apart from that it was really good.
LOvely work
your grandparents seem kind!!
Love it