Jahkeema that was very moving, the only thing I would say, is that you should put in commas. But apart from that it’s a very moving piece of work. 🙂
I love it so much JJ. But there are some missing pieces of punctuation. But lovely, outstanding, brilliant story Jahkeema! 🙂
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Jahkeema that was very moving, the only thing I would say, is that you should put in commas.
But apart from that it’s a very moving piece of work.
🙂
I love it so much JJ. But there are some missing pieces of punctuation. But lovely, outstanding, brilliant story Jahkeema!
🙂