Great job Alex i liked the elipses because it makes the reader guessing. You should improve on all of the I s By Brian
Thanks for the help I did use a little amount in my BIG WRITE
I thought that was good you have used powerful words and strong metaphors.it was not very scary and you don’t need to use that many ellipses.
First of all I didn’t try to make it scary but thanks for telling me about the ellipses I changed them into either full stops or words in my big write.
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Great job Alex i liked the elipses because it makes the reader guessing.
You should improve on all of the I s
By Brian
Thanks for the help I did use a little amount in my BIG WRITE
I thought that was good you have used powerful words and strong metaphors.it was not very scary and you don’t need to use that many ellipses.
First of all I didn’t try to make it scary but thanks for telling me about the ellipses I changed them into either full stops or words in my big write.