Brilliant poem I’m on the edge of my seat.
Well done Dea I like how you left it on a cliff hanger but you could improve on using less I’s and add a little bit more to your poem as it is a bit short. 🙂
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Brilliant poem I’m on the edge of my seat.
Well done Dea I like how you left it on a cliff hanger but you could improve on using less I’s and add a little bit more to your poem as it is a bit short. 🙂