Luciano – suspense part 1

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1. pulaa21 says:

   January 11, 2016 at 2:09 pm

   Well done Luciano I really like the way you use ‘my chest heaving against the cold stone’ 🙂

   But you used the wrong word it’s not ‘the door squealing’ it’s squealed .

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