the cat rahi

2 Responses to the cat rahi

1. masoh says:

   March 15, 2013 at 11:22 am

   Well done Rahi,try to use more discriptive words. Don’t forget commas.
2. abdim says:

   March 15, 2013 at 5:38 pm

   that was really good and i liked the you planed out your story

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