It is very hard to read your work because the colers of your work keeps on changing
that is good but it is very hard to see.
Maby use some more connectives and adjectives I hate cats thats why i like this story
I enjoyed reading your work but do you not think that it’s sad to kill a cat WITH A DRILL!! And there sre some silly mistakes on your work.
who would kill a cat with drilll
Ha that’s funny but that colour thing was very annoying it would of been better without it but good work overall 🙂
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It is very hard to read your work because the colers of your work keeps on changing
that is good but it is very hard to see.
Maby use some more connectives and adjectives I hate cats thats why i like this story
I enjoyed reading your work but do you not think that it’s sad to kill a cat WITH A DRILL!! And there sre some silly mistakes on your work.
who would kill a cat with drilll
Ha that’s funny but that colour thing was very annoying it would of been better without it but good work overall 🙂