I like the end bit when you say weird and it think it was amazing
Your writing is very creative also I really liked the part when it said about the crisps because you even told me what the name was. In the middle it did not make a lot of sense maybe you can improve that.
Good work Zeynep. I liked the part that it said WIERD in capital letters
I like the way you use punctuation in your writing to make it sound better
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I like the end bit when you say weird and it think it was amazing
Your writing is very creative also I really liked the part when it said about the crisps because you even told
me what the name was.
In the middle it did not make a lot of sense maybe you can improve that.
Good work Zeynep. I liked the part that it said WIERD in capital letters
I like the way you use punctuation in your writing to make it sound better