100 word challenge by Jessica

Posted on June 1, 2015 by Deleted User
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3 Responses to 100 word challenge by Jessica

  1. erssr says:
    June 1, 2015 at 11:09 am

    Well done but on the first line it didn’t really make sense
    But anyway it was a good story 🙂

  2. hempr says:
    June 1, 2015 at 11:10 am

    I really like the colour really imagnitive

    By Regan

  3. tekaz says:
    June 1, 2015 at 11:20 am

    I like the colours that you have youse for the writing
    but the first sentence doesn’t really make sense
    Good Job
    By Zeynep

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