The Fizz Bar By Ronnie

Posted on June 1, 2015 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to The Fizz Bar By Ronnie

  1. mcmet says:
    June 1, 2015 at 11:11 am

    * You were going to be a really good publisher when you are older
    * your work was really good that was great
    you could have more descriptive words into it

    Well done Ronnie From Tamzin

  2. tornado123456789 says:
    June 1, 2015 at 11:20 am

    Nice I want to try one of those fizz bars, I really like the plot of the story also good connectives 😉
    Well Done

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