I think you could make it better by adding more punctuation and using more emotive words and personal experiences.
You put a apostrophe in the wrong place but apart from that it’s good!
COOL FRED,I THINK YOU SHOULD PUT MORE EMOTIVE WORDS AND HOW BRAVE ARE YOU TO SAY TO YOUR CLASS MATES YOU WERE BULLIED THAT’S BRAVE
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I think you could make it better by adding more punctuation and using more emotive words and personal experiences.
You put a apostrophe in the wrong place but apart from that it’s good!
COOL FRED,I THINK YOU SHOULD PUT MORE EMOTIVE WORDS AND HOW BRAVE ARE YOU TO SAY TO YOUR CLASS MATES YOU WERE BULLIED THAT’S BRAVE