bullying by Fred

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3 Responses to bullying by Fred

  1. ellis says:

    I think you could make it better by adding more punctuation and using more emotive words and personal experiences.

  2. guemb says:

    You put a apostrophe in the wrong place but apart from that it’s good!

  3. keita009.206 says:

    COOL FRED,I THINK YOU SHOULD PUT MORE EMOTIVE WORDS AND HOW BRAVE ARE YOU TO SAY TO YOUR CLASS MATES YOU WERE BULLIED THAT’S BRAVE

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