well done Lukas!! this is very intresting. you gave me lots of facts about cruise ships. I liked the headings you put so I know what each paragraph is about. try to use a varied of sentence starts. would you like to have a trip on a cruise ship one day??
well done Lukas!! this is very intresting. you gave me lots of facts about cruise ships. I liked the headings you put so I know what each paragraph is about. try to use a varied of sentence starts. would you like to have a trip on a cruise ship one day??