GREAT BLOG! I liked the headings because it made it easier to know what the paragraph is about. I think you could put some interesting facts in so then people could get blown away.
Do you like writing on a blog or in a book? Why?
I like your blog Charlie because it has a lot of description about Hot Air Balloons
do you like Hot Air Balloons? Who invented the first Hot Air Balloon
This is a great blog!!! I liked the way you showed what the paragraph was about and I think you could start your sentences but a part from that its brilliant. would you like to go on a hot air balloon? why?
This is a great blog!!! I liked the way you showed what the paragraph was about and I think you could start your sentences with a variety of sentence starts, but a part from that its brilliant. would you like to go on a hot air balloon? why?
Very nice writing! I liked the way you wrote all the information and the subtitles which helped me understand what the writing was about. I think you could improve your spelling ( e.g. serten)
Would you like to blog more at home?
Hi Charlie I was learning so much from you. By the way did he make it to Antartica
By Brian
GREAT BLOG! I liked the headings because it made it easier to know what the paragraph is about. I think you could put some interesting facts in so then people could get blown away.
Do you like writing on a blog or in a book? Why?
I like your blog Charlie because it has a lot of description about Hot Air Balloons
do you like Hot Air Balloons? Who invented the first Hot Air Balloon
This is a great blog!!! I liked the way you showed what the paragraph was about and I think you could start your sentences but a part from that its brilliant. would you like to go on a hot air balloon? why?
This is a great blog!!! I liked the way you showed what the paragraph was about and I think you could start your sentences with a variety of sentence starts, but a part from that its brilliant. would you like to go on a hot air balloon? why?
Very nice writing! I liked the way you wrote all the information and the subtitles which helped me understand what the writing was about. I think you could improve your spelling ( e.g. serten)
Would you like to blog more at home?