WOW!!! I love how you explained the back story with so much detail!! Also your characters appearance was explained so well and I love how you said her eyes were different one was black referring to revenge and one was blue referring to her love to her mother. Great Work!!!
I love your hero. Two different colour eyes good idea. I think the first sentence after the word played should have a comma and get rid of the one after hard
I like how different colours represent the feelings that she feels. I would like to know her moral.
WOW!!! I love how you explained the back story with so much detail!! Also your characters appearance was explained so well and I love how you said her eyes were different one was black referring to revenge and one was blue referring to her love to her mother. Great Work!!!
I love your hero. Two different colour eyes good idea. I think the first sentence after the word played should have a comma and get rid of the one after hard
AMAZING! I want to read more.
I would like to know more about your hero 🙂
I really like your story Naomi and I like it how you based a bit of it about yourself 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
that was a good story the way you described your hero 🙂
Brilliant I loved it, I loved the way your hero with different colour eyes ♥