My Peom Magic Night

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2 Responses to My Peom Magic Night

  1. mshuttleworth says:

    An interesting poem Orpra, I like the imagery of a the voices creating deserted streets. next time try adding some personification or Metaphors.
    How does home make you feel?

    • Diamond123456789 says:

      Home makes me feel so safe and home when you move from house to house when you leave its like your leaving memories behind you and moving on it sometimes hurts if you have been there for long.

      Thanks for suggestions and your comment.

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