My adventure story

Posted on March 6, 2015 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to My adventure story

  1. sucul says:
    March 13, 2015 at 2:23 pm

    I like the way you pot adjectives in your store.

    from Ilayda

  2. aulst says:
    March 13, 2015 at 2:30 pm

    Hi Charlotte
    I like your work because you have used lots of adjectives and you have put some openers.
    You need to have some verbs in your sentences.

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