I love your story because you build up the suspense very well. I also liked your simile. Next time try to check your spelling. What did Maddy and Ella fight about when they were 5 ?
Hi Lila here is my comment on yore story I am absloutly lured to read on at yore story. I wish you could write some more though .Where did you get the ida about the wing bending the tree though?
To Lila,
I love your story because you build up the suspense very well. I also liked your simile. Next time try to check your spelling. What did Maddy and Ella fight about when they were 5 ?
Hi Lila here is my comment on yore story I am absloutly lured to read on at yore story. I wish you could write some more though .Where did you get the ida about the wing bending the tree though?
Hi lila
I like your tittle it makes me want’s to make me read on and I haven’t even got reading yet.
why did you do the tittle a different color to the writing?
I want to read more – what is the birthday treat?