Excellent work Lucus. Will the meeting turn out to be Dangerous for Kai? I’m looking forward to reading more about Kai and the overlord – However remember capital letters in your title and you missed a lovely opportunity for a comma sandwich – here:
Kai and his dad ,who was a sensei ,were on their way to the dojo to train.
wow Lukas your blog just blew me away and I’m speechless the story was mysterious this blog you just need to stop using kai and he can’t you just add more sentence starter but your blog was still very good
Excellent work Lucus. Will the meeting turn out to be Dangerous for Kai? I’m looking forward to reading more about Kai and the overlord – However remember capital letters in your title and you missed a lovely opportunity for a comma sandwich – here:
Kai and his dad ,who was a sensei ,were on their way to the dojo to train.
thanks for the advice Mr.Shuttleworth. I will look out for that next time 😉
wow Lukas your blog just blew me away and I’m speechless the story was mysterious this blog you just need to stop using kai and he can’t you just add more sentence starter but your blog was still very good