I really like your work Genta, and the quotes you used. You have put “he” to many times. Try to use something else next time. Why is it so surprising he had a daughter? Once again, loved your blog,
From Ruby, Columba
I really like your work Genta I like the way you said what his job was and what he did with his life.
would you like to be a writer when you grow up?
by Brian columba
Some great research, remember – the i in your conclusion should be a capital as it is a pro noun.
Why is it surprising he has a daughter?
Fantastic work Genta, I especially liked how you chose a quote that had lots of similes, but you forgot to do capital ‘I’.
By Lillian
I really like your work Genta, and the quotes you used. You have put “he” to many times. Try to use something else next time. Why is it so surprising he had a daughter? Once again, loved your blog,
From Ruby, Columba
I really like your work Genta I like the way you said what his job was and what he did with his life.
would you like to be a writer when you grow up?
by Brian columba