zackiah car borke

Posted on February 27, 2013 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to zackiah car borke

  1. guemb says:
    February 27, 2013 at 12:29 pm

    The end bit has too many and thens. Try to not do that. But apart from that, Wonderful story!

  2. whitj says:
    February 27, 2013 at 12:31 pm

    Good story but you need a capital letter for title also you spelt broke wrong.

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