I WENT TO THE ZOO AND I SHOR !!!!!!!!

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2 Responses to I WENT TO THE ZOO AND I SHOR !!!!!!!!

  1. hempr says:

    Skye I really like your adjectives

    Maybe you can add some metaphors and similes

    Also you forgot to put a capital I FOR I
    By Regan

  2. whiti says:

    I has to be a capital letter

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