awesome TJ I like the adjectives used and how you describe the food going down to his stomach andmending his racked neck 🙂
nice adjectives
good poem taylor try and make it ryme more
Michael sister does not make sense
Great effort TJ! I like how you compared Skellig’s fragile state to a snowflake falling on your palm. Try improving your spelling though
+”.” to my last comment
Nice poem Taylor but try and make it rhyme a bit more and don’t always start with his
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awesome TJ I like the adjectives used and how you describe the food going down to his stomach andmending his racked neck 🙂
nice adjectives
good poem taylor try and make it ryme more
Michael sister does not make sense
Great effort TJ! I like how you compared Skellig’s fragile state to a snowflake falling on your palm. Try improving your spelling though
+”.” to my last comment
Nice poem Taylor but try and make it rhyme a bit more and don’t always start with his