The strang noises by Dea

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3 Responses to The strang noises by Dea

  1. mcmet says:

    I really expression with your writing, it had loads of metaphors.
    *I wish you had put some similes into your writing.

    From Tamzin

  2. bolad says:

    You have done some spelling mistakes.

  3. websj says:

    you did there emotions
    check your spellings
    you used different words for said

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