METORPHORS!!! One thing to improve on is your tenses it’s eats’ not eat. So many adjectives as well.
well done Omar and Akif you tried really hard star- you did all of your capital letters at the rite places wish-I wish you carried on doing slimy, slivery …. and you forgot the full stop at the end. star-you only done about Skellig
He doesn’t just heal hands he healed the baby so he can do more than just that.
One thing you need to improve is your tenses. Also thing is you started with and twice and it didn’t sound right. But great try.
great metaphors check your work good adjectives
good work because you have adjectives and punctuation vice job keep it up
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METORPHORS!!!
One thing to improve on is your tenses it’s eats’ not eat.
So many adjectives as well.
well done Omar and Akif you tried really hard
star- you did all of your capital letters at the rite places
wish-I wish you carried on doing slimy, slivery …. and you forgot the full stop at the end.
star-you only done about Skellig
He doesn’t just heal hands he healed the baby so he can do more than just that.
One thing you need to improve is your tenses.
Also thing is you started with and twice and it didn’t sound right.
But great try.
great metaphors
check your work
good adjectives
good work because you have adjectives and punctuation vice job keep it up