Great work it is amazing Well done
Skye and Joseph
Well done you included lots of information also when you used your metaphor I could really picture it in my head.
What I think you should improve is you used Michael to many times.
great you gave lots of info but you need to spell Chinese , beetles and Michael right next time amazing you used similes
From Jessica
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Great work it is amazing
Well done
Skye and Joseph
Well done you included lots of information also when you used your metaphor I could really picture it in my head.
What I think you should improve is you used Michael to many times.
great you gave lots of info
but you need to spell Chinese , beetles and Michael right next time
amazing you used similes
From Jessica