Great work but in the future try to make your sentences shorter
I love the way you described Skellig One thing you could improve on is your whole 100 words are in 3 sentences. I also love the adjectives
cool he can heal stuff but I only saw he only healed Michael
Well done Joseph and Skye, it was very interesting! remember to read over your work. we really liked the adjectives in your writing!:);)
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Great work but in the future try to make your sentences shorter
I love the way you described Skellig
One thing you could improve on is your whole 100 words are in 3 sentences.
I also love the adjectives
cool he can heal stuff but I only saw he only healed Michael
Well done Joseph and Skye, it was very interesting! remember to read over your work. we really liked the adjectives in your writing!:);)