Your punctuation is wright some didn’t make sense but you described him in a good way
I like yours because you added adjectives but u made 3 miskctakes
I really liked your writing but after 53 you should put a full stop.
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Your punctuation is wright
some didn’t make sense
but you described him in a good way
I like yours because you added adjectives
but u made 3 miskctakes
I really liked your writing but after 53 you should put a full stop.