Great detail, the last two sentences are amazing! ‘He just lies there in the dust and dirt, life draining out of him.’ Really cool!
That’s a really good piece of writing. I like how you’ve said that his bones were turning to stone as his bones grow harder. Really descriptive as well, GREAT JOB!!
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Great detail, the last two sentences are amazing! ‘He just lies there in the dust and dirt, life draining out of him.’ Really cool!
That’s a really good piece of writing. I like how you’ve said that his bones were turning to stone as his bones grow harder. Really descriptive as well, GREAT JOB!!