Great work loved the adjectives and the language
Skye and Joseph
🙂 WELL DONE !! The phrase ‘ who is wrinkled pale and white who has poorly wings’ doesn’t make sense
We liked all the info But you need to spell Michael right We also liked the fact that you did not give lots away
By Dea and Jessica
Well Done Ronnie & Regan you have tried hard Star~its a wonderful piece of work Improve~You did not use a capital letter on a few of the Micheal’s
Good try but they were quite a few spelling mistakes and parts of it didn’t make sense.
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Great work loved the adjectives and the language
Skye and Joseph
🙂 WELL DONE !! The phrase ‘ who is wrinkled pale and white who has poorly wings’ doesn’t make sense
We liked all the info
But you need to spell Michael right
We also liked the fact that you did not give lots away
By Dea and Jessica
Well Done Ronnie & Regan you have tried hard
Star~its a wonderful piece of work
Improve~You did not use a capital letter on a few of the Micheal’s
Good try but they were quite a few spelling mistakes and parts of it didn’t make sense.