A Big Break out

Posted on February 4, 2015 by Deleted User
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One Response to A Big Break out

  1. armsa says:
    February 5, 2015 at 2:51 pm

    I think its good because you have used punctuation
    At the end you should put a question mark because its a question
    Other then that its a great story.

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