I think this was a great small story I love the gap space really entertaining They could probably use more adjectives. also the sandwhich killing a hyena.
By Regan & Abudi
I thought hyena don’t eat sandwiches well you told us they do. this part really funny and the part is the last line
-This is amazing great work -Instead of skipping days you should go on the next day -Great with the punctuation
It was a good story but you put and then a commar
Maybe it would be a good idea to tell them why its a good story? What did you enjoy most about it?
We think it is a good story because it is funny.
HEEHAAHEHEHALARIOUS!!! I really enjoyed reading it. The last bit was really funny! 😉
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I think this was a great small story I love the gap space really entertaining
They could probably use more adjectives.
also the sandwhich killing a hyena.
By Regan & Abudi
I thought hyena don’t eat sandwiches well you told us they do. this part really funny and the part is the last line
-This is amazing great work
-Instead of skipping days you should go on the next day
-Great with the punctuation
It was a good story but you put and then a commar
Maybe it would be a good idea to tell them why its a good story? What did you enjoy most about it?
We think it is a good story because it is funny.
HEEHAAHEHEHALARIOUS!!! I really enjoyed reading it. The last bit was really funny! 😉