Very dramatic. I feel sad for George.
A really nice blog! i like your use of vocab and use of similies. You could improve by keeping the tense the same. :0 🙂
Very upsetting. Almost made me cry! 🙂 Nice us of adjectives and drama. Well Done!!!!
Great blog Finn! I am speechless. Very dramatic what happened to George.
wow very powerful, I like the use of metaphors although you spelt time-times apart from that AMAZING!
Good job Finn. I feel sad for George though.:)
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Very dramatic. I feel sad for George.
A really nice blog! i like your use of vocab and use of similies. You could improve by keeping the tense the same.
:0 🙂
Very upsetting. Almost made me cry! 🙂
Nice us of adjectives and drama.
Well Done!!!!
Great blog Finn! I am speechless. Very dramatic what happened to George.
wow
very powerful, I like the use of metaphors
although you spelt time-times
apart from that AMAZING!
Good job Finn. I feel sad for George though.:)