Well done Teon! Your sentence made me imagend what the boy felt like. You can improve by not kept on saying his and spell the words correctly. When you get older do you want to be a author?
Well done teon!!You have worked really well keep it up
Teon this is brilliant but it doesn’t really make sense. Do you think you will be a writer when you grow up?
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Well done Teon! Your sentence made me imagend what the boy felt like. You can improve by not kept on saying his and spell the words correctly. When you get older do you want to be a author?
Well done teon!!You have worked really well keep it up
Teon this is brilliant but it doesn’t really make sense. Do you think you will be a writer when you grow up?