Ice palace opinions Leila.S

Posted on January 23, 2015 by Deleted User
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13 Responses to Ice palace opinions Leila.S

  1. sotil says:
    January 30, 2015 at 3:06 pm

    Hi Leila,
    I think it is brilliant especially all of the positive things you said about the book.
    Are you sure only 7 and 8 year olds will enjoy ?
    Next time try to make the words bigger, I found it hard to read.

    • sival says:
      February 6, 2015 at 2:33 pm

      Hi Lia,
      No I don’t think just 7 and 8 year olds will enjoy because it is a great book and has lots of easy words and great descriptive phrases.

  2. pular says:
    January 30, 2015 at 3:13 pm

    Hello Leila
    I like your writing because it is very neat. Next time your could make the background a better colour.

  3. liddf says:
    January 30, 2015 at 3:16 pm

    Hi Leila
    I like your text but I think you need to write some more similes.

  4. stewc says:
    January 30, 2015 at 3:19 pm

    Hi Leila,I LOVE your blog!The adjectives that you’ve used are amazing.What do you think will happen to Ivan?Next time try to use a different word to ‘I’.

  5. adenz says:
    January 30, 2015 at 3:22 pm

    I absolutely loved it you also used a brilliant simile I have nothing to say about what she done wrong because she’s done nothing wrong

    • wfrewin says:
      January 30, 2015 at 4:34 pm

      It’s lovely that you are so positive Zak. However don’t look at it as looking for something wrong when you make suggestions. It’s a chance for you to say what you would like to see in the blog to improve it.

  6. zampt says:
    January 30, 2015 at 3:26 pm

    Hi Leila,
    I think its great that you have opened your sentences with lots of different openers.

    Hi Leila,
    I really like the way that you have used different openers for all of the sentences.

    • wfrewin says:
      January 30, 2015 at 4:27 pm

      Great positive comment, I agree Leila’s use of openers is great. Be careful before you post make sure you read through your comment to avoid saying the same thing twice.

  7. danir says:
    January 30, 2015 at 3:30 pm

    Hi Leila
    I like the way you describe the story
    why would you receomend this book?
    you used only one simile

  8. alije says:
    January 30, 2015 at 3:31 pm

    Hi Leila that’s amazing what do you think the ice palace story was first like in the first page. Hoe much did you like
    it first. I love it I like your adjectives like bizzards of snow through the darkness. Put more similes if you want more people to like it.

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