ADAMA-MY MUM FLIPPED THE PANCAKE

6 Responses to ADAMA-MY MUM FLIPPED THE PANCAKE

1. hoqur says:

   February 12, 2013 at 12:05 pm

   love the description 🙂
2. keita009.206 says:

   February 12, 2013 at 12:09 pm

   THANKS GUYS FOR YOUR COMMENTS GIVE ME MORE ADVICE:-)
3. chows says:

   February 12, 2013 at 12:13 pm

   Great work I like the end.
4. whitj says:

   February 12, 2013 at 12:21 pm

   fantasic story 😀
5. guemb says:

   February 14, 2013 at 9:20 pm

   Really good Adama.
   When you said “do you want some syrup”, you have to add a question mark before the speech marks.
   Love it!
6. westd says:

   February 15, 2013 at 11:30 am

   You done really well but maybe you can use more connectives and addjectives next time so well done you!

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