well done umut it was good but you used to much of zackiah’s name than yours
you need to use pronouns 🙂
😉
Too many Zackiahs you need to use pronouns but other than that it was very good.
LIKE THE OTHERS OU NEED TO USE MORE PRONOUNS AND AT THE END IT DIDN’T REALLY MAKE SENSE
Really good, but there are a few mistakes you need to correct. But apart from that, outstanding. 🙂
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well done umut it was good but you used to much of zackiah’s name than yours
you need to use pronouns 🙂
😉
Too many Zackiahs you need to use pronouns but other than that it was very good.
LIKE THE OTHERS OU NEED TO USE MORE PRONOUNS AND AT THE END IT DIDN’T REALLY MAKE SENSE
Really good, but there are a few mistakes you need to correct. But apart from that, outstanding. 🙂