Hi
I think I should of put more character description in it but we were in early stages of the Ice Palace then.
I will take your advice for next time.
Ruby
Hi,
My favourite part of Ice Palace is when Ivan thinks he sees his brother but it turned out to be Starjik’s cruel trick! I also like the wolf attack! Do you like Ice Palace?
Ruby
We like your description. you are a very good writer. How dose the book make you feel when you read it? Maybe next time you could check your work after you are finished.
Hi guys
The book makes me feel exhilarated because of how often Ivan escapes near death and how many adventures he has.
I will use your comment for next time.
Ruby
Well done Ruby! you have used fantastic vocabulary. I love the way you used lots of enthusiasm.
What age do you think people should be to read it?
by Freya and Sara from Aquila class
I think age 7-12 should read it. Thank you for the advice.
Ruby
I like that you made this really interesting.
is there any more you could write?
I think you should write a few things about the charcreters
Hi
I think I should of put more character description in it but we were in early stages of the Ice Palace then.
I will take your advice for next time.
Ruby
I like your writing because you give lot’s of detail and used some great vocabulary.
What is your favourite part of the book so far?
Hi,
My favourite part of Ice Palace is when Ivan thinks he sees his brother but it turned out to be Starjik’s cruel trick! I also like the wolf attack! Do you like Ice Palace?
Ruby
We like your description. you are a very good writer. How dose the book make you feel when you read it? Maybe next time you could check your work after you are finished.
Hi guys
The book makes me feel exhilarated because of how often Ivan escapes near death and how many adventures he has.
I will use your comment for next time.
Ruby
Great review!!!!
There is so much detail. There is not much you could improve on . I would love to read some more of your reviews.