It’s funny that you called Santa fat.
I love the use of you adjectives. But all you forgot to add was commas and full stops. Apart from that it was good. Well done.:) ♥♥♥
“Fat Man” Funny ♥♥♥
Good but make sure to put punctuation in the right places
Awesome Story! 🙂 I Really loved it and you have used a lot of adjective’s and have used them correctly well done 🙂 (But are your sure that its 100 words and you haven’t used any full stops 🙁
It was hysterical how you called santa fat 😀 but you forgot to do commas and full stops. Overall it was great.
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It’s funny that you called Santa fat.
I love the use of you adjectives. But all you forgot to add was commas and full stops. Apart from that it was good. Well done.:) ♥♥♥
“Fat Man” Funny ♥♥♥
Good but make sure to put punctuation in the right places
Awesome Story! 🙂 I Really loved it and you have used a lot of adjective’s and have used them correctly well done 🙂 (But are your sure that its 100 words and you haven’t used any full stops 🙁
It was hysterical how you called santa fat 😀 but you forgot to do commas and full stops. Overall it was great.