Well written and interesting concept, loved it<3 🙂
good dramatic ending
Good starter Miss Amy but there are negatives. Firstly I I I I I. Try to use different sentence starters. Overall Good story. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
A amazing piece of writing from me And Olivia.T
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Well written and interesting concept, loved it<3 🙂
good dramatic ending
Good starter Miss Amy but there are negatives. Firstly I I I I I. Try to use different sentence starters. Overall Good story. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
A amazing piece of writing from me And Olivia.T