Its always been there By Chloe and Faith

Posted on November 27, 2014 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to Its always been there By Chloe and Faith

  1. mshuttleworth says:
    November 28, 2014 at 11:37 am

    Wonderful girls. I love the adverb openings……lets up grade ‘but’.

  2. harus says:
    December 3, 2014 at 3:15 pm

    I like the way you used adverbs in the right place!!! Try to use different conjunctions instead of using but so many times.

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