Make sure you use commas in your sentences. Because sometimes people can’t keep their breath for so long. And try to use capital letters after FULL STOPS!!!!!!
I liked that the blog background was black and the writing was green because it looks really cool and you use a bit more adjectives’ to make it a lot exciting.
Well done Bobby. You really made sure your sentences make sense.
Make sure you use commas in your sentences. Because sometimes people can’t keep their breath for so long. And try to use capital letters after FULL STOPS!!!!!!
I liked that the blog background was black and the writing was green because it looks really cool and you use a bit more adjectives’ to make it a lot exciting.