Some great detail. However this has been rushed as you have missed capitals for November, and World War One. Also does ‘many of people’ make sense?
Isobele, remember to use capital letters for name and places, e.g. November. What did they plant? Not lifes, lives. I like the way you talked about WW1. Next time use capital letters for titles!
:] thanks I will remember to do caps next time
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Some great detail. However this has been rushed as you have missed capitals for November, and World War One. Also does ‘many of people’ make sense?
Isobele, remember to use capital letters for name and places, e.g. November. What did they plant? Not lifes, lives. I like the way you talked about WW1. Next time use capital letters for titles!
:]
thanks I will remember to do caps next time