This is amazing Jamie extremely impressed by your flow and your understanding of how it felt to be a solider around that time! Your a secret little lyrical master! Kakakakaka click click boom aka celebration! A big round of applause for this work. Well done JJJ xxx
Wonderful Jamie, remember poems and raps are not written in paragraphs.
Okay sir i will remember that next time.
This is amazing Jamie extremely impressed by your flow and your understanding of how it felt to be a solider around that time! Your a secret little lyrical master! Kakakakaka click click boom aka celebration! A big round of applause for this work. Well done JJJ xxx