THE EYE OF THE WOLF Scarlett

Posted on November 5, 2014 by Deleted User
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  1. mshuttleworth says:
    November 5, 2014 at 2:13 pm

    An excellent effort Scarlett. You have used the correct tense and person with some wonderful openers. Some of your sentences could use full stops instead of commas.

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