You have really put your reader into the wolfs mind. Well done. Just re read some of your sentences which could be polished up. Eg: not fulfil me of the she wolfs death. – This could re – After her death I felt empty inside. my desires unfulfilled.
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You have really put your reader into the wolfs mind. Well done. Just re read some of your sentences which could be polished up. Eg: not fulfil me of the she wolfs death. – This could re – After her death I felt empty inside. my desires unfulfilled.