I really liked this story but you need to add more detail. Lillian
That was a good piece of writing, although you have used so many I ‘s. You could put some powerful adverbs in front. e.g. Sadly, courageously. Also, remember your capital letters!
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I really liked this story but you need to add more detail.
Lillian
That was a good piece of writing, although you have used so many I ‘s.
You could put some powerful adverbs in front. e.g. Sadly, courageously.
Also, remember your capital letters!