Great Amy your story is funny. I like your sense of humour. Your speech punctuation is really good and you remembered to begin a new line for each character’s speech. Next time don’t forget to say who is speaking each time. Columba class
WOW that made the whole of Perseus class laugh and I love the way you’ve done the speech you’ve used. GREAT!!!
From The Dark Shadow or Finn.
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Great Amy your story is funny. I like your sense of humour. Your speech punctuation is really good and you remembered to begin a new line for each character’s speech. Next time don’t forget to say who is speaking each time.
Columba class
WOW that made the whole of Perseus class laugh and I love the way you’ve done the speech you’ve used.
GREAT!!!
From The Dark Shadow or Finn.