We really like the changing colours that you have used because it makes it more exciting. We also like the facts, particularly the facts where you have included descriptions. We have also been learning about the Romans so we enjoyed reading your facts. We think you could improve your writing by adding some more detail about the Celts.
We really like the changing colours that you have used because it makes it more exciting. We also like the facts, particularly the facts where you have included descriptions. We have also been learning about the Romans so we enjoyed reading your facts. We think you could improve your writing by adding some more detail about the Celts.
From Aquila Class
I like your idea of the different colours also that your writing about the Celts and the Romans. But I think you should write a tiny bit more.
from charlie .g and zunan
dear joe i like the changing colour
and the shapes
but it is short
Pretty Brilliant!
How did you get so much information IN ONLY TWO CIRCLES?!!!!!!!
RSPV
I wish that you could of put a bit more stuff in the “before”